Auroras
"Above All" collection
Silence! Hear the morning wind,
Spreading across the land…
Silence! Auroras in the blue,
Prepare for a new day…
A day of hardship,
Beneath the blazing sun,
Uncertainty,
A new normal rises.
Walking down the road,
The dreams overflow,
Sadness upholds,
Hopes below.
Silence! Smell the lavenders,
Tearing down the fear…
Lonely souls upon,
The beloved paradise,
Shattered by coldness,
Knocked down by panic.
Words days and nights,
Non-stop,
Raging through the frights,
Would it be alright?
Silence! Taste the fresh air,
From the calming sea…
The morning comes,
And goes,
We will be home,
Together in warmth.
Harshness of life,
One day will shine,
Above the horizon,
The truths align.
Behold! The auroras,
Blossoming with love…
Sweltering,
Through the fiery sky,
We rise from below,
Slowly but steady.
Golden lights,
Shining through the land,
Hotness from above,
The peaceful hands.
Behold! The yellow marigolds,
Amid the rising heat…
Below the auroras in blue,
Spreading to mankind…
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Comments
Love the phrasing and reflection in this write. Smashing poem. Kudos, peace and smiles. TFOTS
Thanks! This is my first one so there might be problems, but overall I am very happy with it.
No problem! Might I add welcome to the Cosmos! I'm sure you'll fit right in ;). Best wishes to you. TFOTS
Welcome Pham ! Really great write! so glad you have arrived!..........Jim
Agree with Jim, yes, Pham, it's a good write! You must have an intrinsic poetic mind if this is the very first of your write :)
The plot is wonderful:
from aurora's blue to marigold's yellow with the rising heat
The reader is attracted:
from Silence! to Behold! - as if you "order" the reader to act (in a good way)
Looks you've planed a series already as your next piece is on marigolds (yellow? or even more bright colours, I'm going to find out) - congrats!
-- Yiyan
Thank you very much! I really appreciate your opinions!