Awaken

Beautiful melody in dance beckoned by serene,
Breaks the solemn rapture of dusk and moonlight pristine.
Awoken within the canopy beneath sun kissed skies,
Vast in Aves in feathered wings with the dawning light arise.
Blossoming corolla, blades of green in shade,
Abide wonderous butterfly and others in light evade.
Rabbit stirs in undergrowth, rose and florets of white,
Dotted bloom of scattered leaves hide orchestra in flight.
Nestling in the treetops preen exquisite plume,
Unfolded bells and daffodils will awake in springtime soon.
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Hi all.Β If you do not like this poem can you please explain why you don't like it so I can build on it and improve? Thank for your honest opinions.
Requested deletion and will try again.
wow why would you delete this lovely write? this is superbly composed