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Babycham Deers and Romantic Lands

Babycham Deers and Romantic Lands

South Pacific, Jiminy Cricket,

This world

I tried to gain access,

I tried to write

A Book

That would capture

All my happiness,

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Full of romance,

Life that was enhanced

By beauty and love,

Carousel and Disneyland,

Babycham deers

And romantic lands,

These patterns I wove.

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Tony Taylor

Hey Carl Halling!!.........never read you before (my loss)..........I Love this ........you've accomplished your goal in my eyes brother..........VERY romantic!!.........aren't Babycham deers the Logo for that drink (I think it was a fawn originally) on the bottle of that sparkling drink made of pears........"The Original Girlie Drink" if memory serves..........regardless, I enjoyed this very much.............sensitive heart brother..........well done!!.............T xo

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Carl Halling

Hi Tony, I'm so glad you like this, and find it romantic. That's right, the original Babycham deer was a fawn on a bottle of sparkling perry, very popular in the 1970s. If I was honest, I don't think I've ever drunk it! But I used to love the dreamy advertisements. Thanks again :)Ā Carl.

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