Poem -
Babylonian Waterfalls
Like 3 Pin it 0Inhaled alterarted
Vegetable oil and H20
Overloaded
Electrocuted....
The fuses blow!
Hexonic hallucinations
Neon nature calls
Cascading over consciousness
Babylonian waterfallsAyahuasca
Dimethyltryptamine...Picturesque
Perfect
Snug romance
In a lucid dream
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Comments
Sheer brilliance, sorry for spamming, but it's nice to have you back Syd!
Kind comments such as these keep me writing Max.
Thank you. Positive vibes mean a lot.
- Syd
Wow such a beautiful poem!! Babylon yayy!! Your terms and diction are awesome. Kudos!
Plz do check out and comment my newest poem too
Wow Syd you took me on a trip with this one. Your referencing to hallucinations and slipping into an escape were so well defined, you kept to a lovely rhythm and structure to the poem itself. Ending with that definitive moment when you reach that peek
Beautifully done
Gwen
Hi Gwen,
Thank you for reading and leaving feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Vaping tryptamines isn't everyone's cup of tea but hopefully my words have described the experience well so you may never have to. Really appreciate the positive feedback.
Take care - Syd