Poem - 06 March 2021, 17:08

Babylonian Waterfalls

Inhaled alterarted
Vegetable oil and H20
Overloaded
Electrocuted....

The fuses blow!

Hexonic hallucinations
Neon nature calls
Cascading over consciousness
Babylonian waterfalls

Ayahuasca
Dimethyltryptamine...

Picturesque
Perfect
Snug romance
In a lucid dream

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Poetry Genre:

Narrative

Topic:

Happiness

5 comments

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The fish of the sea06 March 2021, 17:22

Sheer brilliance, sorry for spamming, but it's nice to have you back Syd!

Syd06 March 2021, 17:33

Kind comments such as these keep me writing Max.

Thank you. Positive vibes mean a lot.

- Syd

S.zaynab.kamoonpury20 March 2021, 08:04

Wow such a beautiful poem!! Babylon yayy!! Your terms and diction are awesome. Kudos!

Plz do check out and comment my newest poem too

Gwendoline13 May 2021, 02:15

Wow Syd you took me on a trip with this one. Your referencing to hallucinations and slipping into an escape were so well defined, you kept to a lovely rhythm and structure to the poem itself. Ending with that definitive moment when you reach that peek

Picturesque
Perfect
Snug romance
In a lucid dream

Beautifully done
Gwen

Syd13 May 2021, 16:04

Hi Gwen,

Thank you for reading and leaving feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Vaping tryptamines isn't everyone's cup of tea but hopefully my words have described the experience well so you may never have to. Really appreciate the positive feedback.

Take care - Syd