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Back to country nights

Back to country nights

City living doesn’t allow
Star gazing in soft darkness.
Remembering nights
Long gone.
Back to childhood,
Back to inky stretches of country night,
Illuminated by stars, planets, Milky Way, aurora borealis, moon.
Night time was energizing, inspiring, quiet, safe.

At least there are the moon, isolated planet, sporadic star
In city living.
Night is not quiet or safe,
Streetlights fail to energize, inspire.
They illuminate trash, traffic, poverty, danger,
Carelessness, murder, guns, knives.
They shine in through shaded windows,
Robbing sleep.

Sometimes near silence in predawn hours,
Outside, breathing deep, longing for
Thunderstorms, electrifying natural light
Drowning out manmade noise
Night or day.
Soon comes thunder,
Reverberating throughout city and country,
Powerful, enlightening, soothing, sometimes dangerous.

City noise drowned out,
Whipping winds, relentless rains, crackling light.
Back to childhood,
Thunderstorms rolling in over Rocky Mountains,
Enthralling, awesome, cleansing.
Don’t know if I’ll stay in city living,
Move coming up; want of a garden, tranquility, natural night lights.

Maybe it’s time to leave city living.

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Devon La Porte

Hi Susan, a very cool and different way of structuring this write, very descriptive adjectives really had me longing for the fresh country air and natural night scene that I agree is a lot more soothing than a noisy city where (and I like this line) unnatural light shines in the window. Very hard to see that beautiful milky way of stars in that unnaturally lit city. 

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