Poem -
Backside
discipline is love...respect went to the great participation trophy in the sky...
A little more incentive shown in my time,
I was just looking for freedom to rule!
Back when phone calls were simply a dime,
When disobeying was being a fool!
Never was I a procrastinator!
I was just seeking a little fun!
We need a new trash eliminator,
Besides, have eternity to get it done.
That answer, my mother wasn't pleased!
She said she had another plan in mind.
She grabbed hold of my ear and squeezed!
That is when my moving feet; I did find!
If; like happy dolphins; you want to play?
But your mother for you has some chores.
You better let wisdom carry the day!
So your backside doesn't display any sores!
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Comments
Lol, this took me down memory lane. Lovely lines Jim. Cheers!
Glad you got a chuckle! Thank You!.Jim
In recent years, there on some stories on "tigress mothers" -- sounds your mum is one of them -- that's why you're so good now? :)
Thanks Yiyan! yes they were tough but fair..........Jim
LOL!!....Took me down memory lane too!!.....those were such happy times....even though my father REALLY left some ugly marks on my 'Backside'......there was still respect for your elders then!!.....ALL STARS!!...thanx for sharing this dear poet brother!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Glad you got a chuckle! They call it abuse now, It got my attention and curious! I suddenly wanted to do the right thing! lol! I think respect has gone to the great participation trophy in the sky!...................Jim
Ha ..yes Jim the good old days lol...when even teachers could give you the cane!!!...bring them back I say!!!...good write 🤗🤗
Yes, they had plastic and wooden wack boards at my school, OUCH! Thank you Marion!
Never had that experience, my parents prefered screaming lol. Haha, that got dark..... Kudos to your work Jim, sorry I nearly missed it if it weren't for Cherie, Best wishes, your friend, Max
Thank You Max for making the effort! glad you dodged the wacks. I only got one at school and that was because the bad guy didn't fess up, so we all got one!.....I think they call that communism? lol! be well!.Jim
Thank you for the support Liliana!........Jim
Better let your wisdom carry the day.
Brilliant
Thank You Liliana ! lol! trying to be funny sometimes Thank You for the pin!. ....Jim
Keep re reading this its that good.
Looking forward to your next poem
i remmber those days
the ruler bang on the dask
that will wake you up
sitting in the corner
or if you were real bad
put you in the closet
those were the days
i remmber well the wost
of all wood spoon oh no
ouch
Thank You for the support Greg!
Thank you Hj!
Than You Al!
Thank You John!