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BANG!

BANG!

BANG!
Door slams
Window shakes
Vase breaks

BANG!
Man shouts
Woman scared
Love once shared

BANG!
Man slaps
Woman screams
Blood streams

BANG!
Shot fired
One dead
Woman fled 

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Richard Waters

There is more than power, here. There is recognition. Of times, of locations, of situations. And, of REALITY. In the way, of " things ", you correlate slang expression of " intimacy " with " violent conduct ", born of frustrations.
The present times have taught us. They have better prepared us. For, what lies ahead.
You, must realize the importance of your age....and what happens WITHIN it. All " eras " have significance, obviously, but, we must " take stock " of a heightened purpose resulting from the abnormal tendencies displayed. Quite clearly, I'm afraid.
We, all, shall have to take our responsibilities SERIOUSLY in laying foundations, of better, for those to come.
Great work. Dramatic, is required. To, " ram home " what is faced....and what we have, TO DO.
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