Poem -

bang bang we're dead

I do not know why they were all
killed
Or with what sin they must have
been filled
I do not remember holding the
gun
Or how fast or which way that I
tried to run

I do not remember looking back
Or planning it out or wanting them
gone
I only recall that I could not be
helped
That they had no power, no power
at all

I only remember the crying for
one
I only remember the dying for
one
But he was not them and they
were not him
Maybe that's why they died, maybe
that was their sin

M P 2/11/22

 

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Wondering is this about a massacre,  it is written in eloquent poetic style wow! Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

 

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author
Marion

Hi Zaynab...I believe interpretation is mostly down to the reader and thanks so much for taking the time by the way. To clarify though I wrote it about retreat, maybe situations or mental health problems that cause a person to socially isolate and banish a previous life to the dustbin. I will definitely take a look at your newest x

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