Poem -
BANSHEE BLUES #I
Banshee blues and histrionic hues and howls and screams, (full moons) and vitriolic dreams...
Flashes of Light through the darkness interplay,
With wordplay, knifeplay, don't know if it's night or day...
Must I go on, must you, must we,
Que sera sera...what will be will be... X
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Comments
Not quite up to your usual standard Mr Floyd. Seems short and nasty like perhaps you didn't get your Cornish pasty?
Room for improvement..
Ahahahaha ... Exactly... !!!
Glad you can see it that way. It's always good when an artist can take constructive criticism and turn their lives (woops work) around! x
I believe this is the first poem I've had the pleasure reading by you, Blake.
Nice effort, I enjoyed the topic.
Keep lurking in the shadows. It's cooler in the dark...
~Dean Kuch
Cheers Dean...
Much appreciated!!!
Start at 'Rocking The Banshee' ...
then ... 'Banshee Blues #I ... And then onto 'Banshee Blues #III' ...
simply for continuity... Or just for the sheer hell of it!!!Ā
Ahahaha
LOLĀ
...
"Do You Want It Darker"
... Leonard Cohen ...
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Will do, Blake, and you're welcome.
Take it sl-easy,
~Dean ?
AHAHAHAHAĀ
Almost 3am where I am and not quite sure how to take that!!! ?PMSLĀ