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Be Assured

Be Assured

There’s something sublime  about  nature and time 
that repeats till its meaning is clear.
Every night turns to day in the very same way,
every day into weeks,months and years

To help our souls grow its a comfort to know 
that the cold winter chills will decline,
and the sun reappear, at the start of the year
new born spring and the weather is fine

The creationist  knows that the path that he chose
will not stray from the route it should be.
As the dawn follows night we know we’ll be alright
just as all rivers run to the sea

Be assured not afraid, that the choices you made
will determine the route your life takes.
Some might be ill advised  and a few compromised
but no life lived is without mistakes

You are human my friend,so just fight to the end
and perhaps it might turn out askew
But be fearless and brave, every  life is unpaved
and the way it turns out makes you YOU!

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Mina ✨

 "The creationist knows that the path that he chose will not stray from the road it should be," has got to be my favourite line from this piece of work! I found myself resonating with it and questioned as to why because there many well-written verses and yet this one stuck out immediately. To answer my own question I believe it to be that so much of a person's life is lost by that one task; questioning if one's choices are the right ones or constantly looking forward in an attempt to control the future from any negative experiences. However, through this poem I learnt that life shouldn't be wasted or taken for granted with the expectation to obtain great things but rather to live life as greatly as one can in their individual circumstances. Thank you for sharing this thoughtful piece of work, friend! 

Tehmina xo
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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lodigiana

I am just loving your thoughtful response Tehmina! You have grasped exactly the feeling that I wanted to show through this poem and expressed it  so eloquently..we do, so often, take things for granted or not recognise when to turn something into an opportunity..and miss out on living life to its most fulfilling outcome. Thank you so much for your lovely comments which really do mean so much to me! Lodigiana x

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