BEAUTIFUL MONSTER

A beauty so distorted
A vision once sublime
Her face would make the angels sing
Got sweeter over time
āTil theĀ day her looks were taken
By a lowlife; vengeful man
Defaced herĀ of aĀ future
Did his deed and then he ran
Her family they were broken
Her life was stripped of hope
Pleasure; fun; frivolity
On its heels;Ā it did elope
Ran away with her friend āfutureā
Stuck its fingers up to āloveā
She never thought sheād āliveā again
Prayed for help from up above
But she was not a girl of faith
Hadnāt ever been to Mass
Didnāt know the Bibleās story
Was a āgo-gettingā sort of lass
Now her fire was extinguished
And her soul was trodden down
Held her head up in the ruins
Of a life gone underground
In the depths of sheer despair
In a place no girl should go
Lived a life of solitude
A manās touch sheād never know
But with courage and pure honour
And a heart now made of steel
She found faith and self-respect
In a love she knew was real
He embraced all that she was
And the flesh that she had lost
Admired; cared and wanted her
No matter what the cost
Saw the beauty deep within
Felt the love they shared as one
No longer did she see the beast
All 'doubt' in life was gone ..
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nice one Rachel; a story of this natureĀ
teaches us what is important, easy to
read a lesson for us all.Ā
Kind rgsĀ
JaiĀ
Cheers Jai, and thanks for reading :)
It's a pleasure; I am readingĀ
after midnight which is perfectĀ
for your poem;Ā
i neglected to praise your imageĀ
great selection!Ā
Best from Jai :)Ā
Thanks Jai, glad you like the image, a little strange maybeĀ but hope it puts the message across! :)
Cheers Angel, nice to hear from you and thanks for reading! :)
Excellent write again Rachel, congratulations x:)
Thanks for your kind comments Jason, and thanks for reading :)
Nice flow, story seamlessly coming to life! Ā
Thanks Jayson for your comments, much appreciated :)
brilliant Rachel loved it congrats big 5 x
Thank you so much Susan, much appreciated :)
Fantastic job! It goes along with on of my paintings. Same feelings, similar meaning.
http://www.artcbeta.com/images/art/talk%20no%20evil.jpg
Thanks Svetlana!! Ā I love all your work; you are a very talented lady :)
LOVELY PIECE RACHEL X HAVE YA READ MY GOBBLEDY GOOK ABOUT LA DE DAH YET LOL
Thanks Tracy!! Ā And as you will already know, yes I have lol!! :)