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BEAUTIFUL MONSTER

BEAUTIFUL MONSTER

A beauty so distorted

A vision once sublime

Her face would make the angels sing

Got sweeter over time

ā€˜Til theĀ day her looks were taken

By a lowlife; vengeful man

Defaced herĀ of aĀ future

Did his deed and then he ran

Her family they were broken

Her life was stripped of hope

Pleasure; fun; frivolity

On its heels;Ā it did elope

Ran away with her friend ā€˜future’

Stuck its fingers up to ā€˜love’

She never thought she’d ā€˜live’ again

Prayed for help from up above

But she was not a girl of faith

Hadn’t ever been to Mass

Didn’t know the Bible’s story

Was a ā€˜go-getting’ sort of lass

Now her fire was extinguished

And her soul was trodden down

Held her head up in the ruins

Of a life gone underground

In the depths of sheer despair

In a place no girl should go

Lived a life of solitude

A man’s touch she’d never know

But with courage and pure honour

And a heart now made of steel

She found faith and self-respect

In a love she knew was real

He embraced all that she was

And the flesh that she had lost

Admired; cared and wanted her

No matter what the cost

Saw the beauty deep within

Felt the love they shared as one

No longer did she see the beast

All 'doubt' in life was gone ..

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Jai Masters

nice one Rachel; a story of this natureĀ 

teaches us what is important, easy to

read a lesson for us all.Ā 

Kind rgsĀ 

JaiĀ 

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BLOSSOM

Cheers Jai, and thanks for reading :)

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Jai Masters

It's a pleasure; I am readingĀ 

after midnight which is perfectĀ 

for your poem;Ā 

i neglected to praise your imageĀ 

great selection!Ā 

Best from Jai :)Ā 

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BLOSSOM

Thanks Jai, glad you like the image, a little strange maybeĀ but hope it puts the message across! :)

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BLOSSOM

Cheers Angel, nice to hear from you and thanks for reading! :)

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Jason Lee

Excellent write again Rachel, congratulations x:)

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BLOSSOM

Thanks for your kind comments Jason, and thanks for reading :)

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Jayson Smith

Nice flow, story seamlessly coming to life! Ā 

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BLOSSOM

Thanks Jayson for your comments, much appreciated :)

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BLOSSOM

Thank you so much Susan, much appreciated :)

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Svetlana Bagdasaryan

Fantastic job! It goes along with on of my paintings. Same feelings, similar meaning.
http://www.artcbeta.com/images/art/talk%20no%20evil.jpg

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BLOSSOM

Thanks Svetlana!! Ā I love all your work; you are a very talented lady :)

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Tracy Timothy

LOVELY PIECE RACHEL X HAVE YA READ MY GOBBLEDY GOOK ABOUT LA DE DAH YET LOL

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BLOSSOM

Thanks Tracy!! Ā And as you will already know, yes I have lol!! :)

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