They say there’s beauty
In pain
But what is beautiful
About sitting on the bathroom floor,
Tears dripping
Into a puddle of blood,
And crying
Until your breath stops?
I agree wholeheartedly with DBLANK!!.......the only beauty in pain is that it helps you to be aware that you're alive....... hence, DBLANK'S fine comment!!.....T ♥
Short, sad, and straight to the point, Dahlya Katz.
No puns intended I assure you.
I feel the majority of poets are truly sensitive people–perhaps more so than most.
To coin a popular, well-used phrase, We wear our hearts on our sleeves.
Because of that, we take things much harder and are far more sensitive to the world around us.
This was real, this was raw, and I can completely relate.
Peace... ~Dean ✌
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I agree wholeheartedly with DBLANK!!.......the only beauty in pain is that it helps you to be aware that you're alive....... hence, DBLANK'S fine comment!!.....T ♥
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Short, sad, and straight to the point, Dahlya Katz.
No puns intended I assure you.
I feel the majority of poets are truly sensitive people–perhaps more so than most.
To coin a popular, well-used phrase, We wear our hearts on our sleeves.
Because of that, we take things much harder and are far more sensitive to the world around us.
This was real, this was raw, and I can completely relate.
Peace...
~Dean ✌
Thank you!
You've wrote this beautifully and powerfully :) But like what the others had said its very straightforward and sad!! But its amazingÂ