Poem -
Beauty 14/05/17
A beautiful girl so full of life, is
caught on track by tubes with
might she falls asleep and is out for days.
Her beauty changes in different ways.
Wires here, there and everywhere
but she stays brave Even when
she's poked and prodded she lies
there without a care.
Temp rises most the time
medicine given at all different hours.
Yet she still just lies there without
a care Brave as one can be she's
such a beauty with smiles to chill
​​​​Written by Jennie (c) copy right protectedÂ
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This poem is about a 22month old little girl who has been through hell since the day she was born 4 operations 2 awake camera's being full of tunes after ever operation parents being told she could have died if they didny take her in when they did and at one hospital they kept getting turned away saying she was okÂ
Hello James...
My heart and prayers go out with the family...
The hospitals have been able to get away with this for years and years,...
​​​​​​I'm glad she found a hospital that cares...
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Great write!
Beautiful dedication!
Best wishes and healing for the little one
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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Thanks so very much for your kind words I wrote the message because I didn't think people liked my poem very much I've a website with more thanks again
Sorry Jennie...
I thought it said James and he wrote it on your behalf...
I know better than to try this without my glasses...
Prayers and blessings!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
It's ok no need to apologise thanks for your kind wordsÂ
Heart and real feeling was woven through the beautiful fabric of this poem, it sent chills of raw emotion.
So sad, but beautifully expressed!
Gayle thanks so much for your kind words I read 1 of your poems it was so lovely I didn't think anyone was liking my poem that's why I wrote the comment I've a website with more. She's my little inspiration along side with her 2 big brother's most of what i write is from the heartÂ
My favorite poetry is when it's expressed from the heart. They have feeling and meaning. I'll be looking for more of your poetry. :-)
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Gayle you find more of my poems on this websiteÂ