Poem -
Beauty
Larry's beautiful challenge
Like 9 Pin it 5Snow capped peaks kiss deep blue shade, the pinnacle oversees craggy planes and blade, lea of green dusted in hue, nestling drops of midmorning dew.
Nocturne serenade midst wisp of white, through early morn in dawn of light.Β Through murk of dusk, charcoal of bough,
Flora is vast, sporadic in grow.A drop in sapphire, breadth saline, glorious fauna twixt marine.Β The epic sunset mirrored on waves,
the magic of Twilight, moonlit rays.The squall, the lightening that rips the skies,
The world I see is through her eyes.My daughter, I love you.
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Comments
So poetically crafted and pinned cause I can
Thank you LisaΒ
wow, brilliant write. It flowed effortlessly off my tongue and made me smile, you captured the beauty so well.
Thank you for your support
Awww so beautifully penned my poetic friend β€οΈ?β€οΈ
Thank you Jill
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My Dear Simon,
You have brilliantly portrayed the epitome of a Father's love for his Daughter.Β I must confess, that until I read the last line, I thought you were writing a tribute to Mother Nature.Β I have pinned this magnificent piece, which I feel you should submit to "Parent's Magazine".Β A thousand stars for you on this one.
I read a poem on this morn
Each line flowing with sweet adorn
The beauty of its lovely flow
Lets its reader soon to know
About a Father's love for a Daughter born
All my love,
Larry xxx
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Thank you Larry. I just wanted to describe the feeling, the view that my children are my world and through them I live and breathe, thank you again.
We need another challenge my friendΒ
Hi Lisa, guess you been having some time out too? Lol.Β Just need to recharge my writing brain.Β New challenge? Ok let's see... My new challenge is, how do you see yourself in this world! ? "I am".
Its beautifully written x
Thank you so much!
Incredible and beautiful!Β
You sure know how to write about beauty.Β
I liked the rich language and metaphors throughout.Β
Favorite lines (I had so many).Β
Thank you means so much more because it's for my daughter ?
Gorgeous is not enough when describing this kind of "BEAUTY".....I'd brilliant suits this.....simply because the subject matter you chose is truly beautiful in and of itself!!β¦...ALL STARS!!β¦...home run my friend!!β¦..Wonderfully penned!!β¦...T xoΒ : )
Thank you Tony ? my daughter is my world, and it means so much more to have people relate and understand and appreciateΒ