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BEEN AWAY AND COMING BACK

BEEN AWAY AND COMING BACK

I've been away from my city far too long 
I can't decide if that is right or wrong 
Things have changed that were not here before
Like the post office and general store 

Life moves on it's a constant change 
Some people embrace it others find it strange 
I prefer things as they were and just the same
What was there before is no more and such a shame 

Shops and buildings that were part of my youth
All taken down a sad reflection of the truth 
What will happen to my city in future years? 
Barely recognisable I think through a sea of tears

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Simon Bromley

Very relatable.  I too no longer live where I grew up.  Now whenever I visit what used to be my home, it's changed so much, it's not the place I once knew.

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Djangos Daughter

So true Kieran. When I visited my home town all the haunts of my youth had been demolished and rebuilt with some modern monstrosity. Change is not always for the better. DD x

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KIERAN1369

Humbled that a Cosmo winner replied to my poem !

I would like to express sincere congratulations on a well deserved honour for December it was really fully justified ! Well done DD....look forward to reading more of your work.

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