Poem -

Between Pauses

For maybe
a moment or two
perhaps ..
Somewhere
between pauses
and his
gasping
for breath like that ..
He thought
she might well
have died
there and then
right beside him ..
But whatever
the case,
may have then
been ..
He was sure
that her
heart skipped
a beat ..
And he loved her
much more
than he had loved
her before
and regardless ..

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Tony Taylor

There's something very soft and touching about the way you paint love upon the page......some lingering memories that are powerful I would imagine.....because pieces like this are VERY compelling dear poet brother....and the intimacy expressed has to come from a wellspring of truth!!.......PINNED!!......great work my friend!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo 

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Neville

Cool .. and so much appreciated Tony T ...................... N :)

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Marion

Oh you talented little bugger you!! Your ability to express a moment in time or even a thought is way above Neville, seriously. PS...I have a puppy!!! German shepherd...Daisy...4 months old. I'm in love again 😊 x

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Neville

Jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez how I would luv to give you both a big hug Marion :) x

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