Poem -
Beware The Watcher
Farely aware of my condition
Of watching,
Though this time
I feel im not the watcher
But brave frogger
Meant to hop from pond
And through trafficked streets
Leaving eager viewing parties
With nothing to offer.
         Surely.........
You heard of when chips are down
And when it rains,
It comes storming
Allowing not
A spectator be, the reason I lack in sleep
And some lame excuse
About an old man snoring.
........Take.....take....take......
Pictures,Â
Aren't they meant to last longer?
For evidences sake
Give me a break
In a monthÂ
Or two, I'll be much stronger.
Be wearyÂ
Oh, observantÂ
Spy
Watch out
I'm......really watchingÂ
Out for you.
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Comments
Very Cool DEVON!!!!............ like a cross between "Rear Window" and divine motivation..........I admire your mind so much............. you have an endless well of creativity coming from your pores............I saw some of your drawings from younger days............ pictures ~ like your words reveal an honest part of yourself.......I think no matter how much you thought that part of your life was over BC.........it ain't bro!!......... you just keep gettin' better at communicatin'!!.........Is that Jimmy Stewart in that pic?......... cool stuff my brother!!........... don't EVER let it end!!!............ smiles...........T xo
You are very observant yourself, for that is...the poster to rear window and yes that is James Stewart. To be honest the picture was perfect I never saw the movie but it's plot is scary in a way similar to my write and has peeked my interest into watching. Thanks for checking out my pictures I have more that I told Eddy I would post but I can't find them. I never forget where that passion has come from T, and I would love to start drawing again I got better and better the more I did that, but my love of spoken word has consumed much of my passions. Love that you used my BC line thats awesome. Most people look with two heads when I say BC then laugh when I explain it. Thank you brother my continuance of evolving poetry is the inspiration from you C and many others on cosmo. Love you big bro!
"Â ........Take.....take....take......
Pictures,... "
This verse echoes like like it should.Â
Again with the typos ! Gosh !
No problem, we all have typos. I like your selections of my poems, they are some of the powerful lines within. I appreciate that.
Hey Devon cool write. I always observe when no one thinks I am . I have a great memory and serves me well in my life and work and in between . I see the things people overlook . Love the write all stars bro .rockÂ
Thanks Rock, my wife hates that im always looking around but that's who iam and it serves me well too. Cheers man.