BEYOND THE VEIL
Beyond the veil of consciousness
beyond this life on earth
I think of a higher place where
death is naught..but..rebirth
This place, many call it heaven
it lies further than any star
And when God calls us home
we know just where we are
It feels as if there`s a golden thread
invisible but connected
The one end lies in our souls
the other end, by him protected
And when our time down here
is through,he gives a little pull
Our bodies go from dust to dust
but to our maker, goes our soul
Of course I cant be certain
if all I have written here is true
But belief in that higher place
and having faith, is all that I can do
As well, I try to be a good person
kindness is nt hard to give
To love thy neighbor to be grateful
and also in peace I hope to live
I would nt say I ve had the easiest
of lives, I ve struggled along the way
But I am thankful with what I was
blessed with, each and every day
So as I think now,I am in the autumn
of life,soon winter will prevail
Death nears,it does nt frighten me
for I believe life begins anew, beyond the veil
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Deborah Great poem sometimes I wonder if heaven would be better then whats going on in the world there has to be peace and love and no wars or hate great poem
Hi Greg I agree with your thoughts I would think
heaven would be a peaceful place where only love reigns
Thank you for your comments always a pleasure to read
Best wishes Debs xo
Hi Debs! Comforting write, soothing & full of hope! Love the image, too! Really like the title and always appreciate faith pieces. :)
Blessings!*!*!
Jacki
Hi Jacki I`m glad you had a comforting and soothing feeling
when you read this one,and you saw hope, that makes me happy:-)
The picture really jumped out at me and totally went with the write
Thank you for your kind comments appreciated
Blessing to you too
Debs
A very comforting piece...I'm not scared of death too...I'm curious to find out what lies on the other side....Nicely written
Lots of love
Hi Sweet Rose I think if we believe we go to better place
when we pass, there is nothing to be afraid of
Thank you for reading always a pleasure to see
your words
Lots of love Debs
My Dear Debs,
We live in veils of darkness, we pray to God above
But are we certain there's a Heaven, and our Savior up above
Sometimes He gives us reason, to doubt what we've been told
That God will always love you, from youth to growing old
No one knows the truthful answer, of whether He sure exists
Some thrive upon His goodness, while others choose subsist
The truth will become apparent, right after our final breath
Are we heading up to Heaven, or is this the finality of Death
Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Hi Larry Thank you for that lovely poem
I think it is a wonderful thing that you
read a poem and take the time to
pen your own poem in review
They are always pertinent to the poems written
and are awesome I appreciate so much
Thank you dear friend
Love n hugs Debs xox
Hey DEBS!!......I LOVE this piece........ it is VERY much the way I believe in that which awaits us "Beyond The Veil"........ and that spreading true kindness is invaluable....... beautifully written.......... the formatting works perfectly too.......I think this is the second write of yours that I've PINNED in a row....... whatever you're doing these days....... keep it up......... Great Read!!.........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.........T xo. ?✳✴☀
Hi Tony So glad you enjoyed this one yes
I believe we have similar beliefs on what lies beyond
this earthly life,I very often read your work on faith and God
and the afterlife and think that s how i think, that s what I believe
Thank you for your lovely words and honoring me with a pin( big smiles )
Love n hugs Debs xo
Wow amen! Such spiritual revelation right here. I really enjoyed the read
Hi Louie Thank you for your kind words
I am glad you enjoyed
I shall catch up and read some of your work
soon
Best wishes Debs
So beautiful and honest! I really love this one! Very eloquent
Hi Amanda Thanks for stopping by
and giving me such kind comments they
are very much appreciated
Best wishes Debs
Hi Merrill Those last to lines are exactly how I feel
what i believe is true.
I have nt really got a type of tea to drink, i like a good tea though
it has to be very strong where you could stand a teaspoon up in it
a tot of milk and two sugars and about ten cups a day haha
Thank you for your lovely words you brighten my day with them
Have a great weekend my friend
Best wishes to you Debs x
Another excellent write....enjoyed the read......Thank You Debs
Hi Lorris Thank you for reading
and for your comments
Glad you enjoyed
Best wishes Debs
Dear Debs
What rhymes with Jai: cry;
What a beautiful poem that's all I can say.
Luv & best wishes Jai:)?
Hi Jai Aww Thanks so much for your lovely
words glad you enjoyed
Love and best wishes to you Debs :-)
Truly loved this poem Deborah,
Complete sincerity, (not only to yourself ) but to (God) as well...Rhythm (cascades) off this write galore....Love the way the poetess speaks from the heart and from her personal experiences in life, as she (lives) it....Happy early Easter poetess (Evans).....Jim
Hi Jim Thank you for your lovely comments
I appreciate them greatly,
Belated Easter blessings to you
Best wishes Debs
Lovely and high.
Hi Anwer Thank you for stopping by to read
and Thank you for commenting
Much appreciated
Best wishes Debs