Birth of A Poem
On a leisurely indulgence
an innocuous volition crept
and stimulated my senses
leaving me agog for a while!
Myriad thoughts were jostling
refraining, refreshing, reforming
with neither rest nor respite.
I remained stoic for a while!
My sigh travels across mile
towards the destination afar.
perhaps, with yearning so dear.
I remained restive for a while!
Amid an intense silence
I embraced my desire slyly
swaying away fears aside.
I remained bold for a while!
In that moment of oblivion
an artistry realm sketched rainbows
onto an invisible surface
I remained invincible for a while!
My heart sang, my soul danced
when my fingers merged the flow
of unsaid words to the obvious.
I remained ecstatic for a while!!
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Honorable Poetess Maaya Dev,
After the greetings of the season
Everyone has to find a way to make them inspired. If you're waiting for a creativity faerie to come along and show you the way, then you are at risk, write on whatever you feel like instantly. Perhaps the most significant element of a good verse is its meaning and rhythm. Everyone is inspired by something different, you just may not know what it is yet, your verses are fabulous in its theme and style, go ahead with your postings, I wish to reserve this poem to appreciate and review via my column POET'S PEN
My applause, my five stars dear Poetess Maaya Dev
Love & Regards
Willy
Honorable Poetess Maaya Dev,
Being inspired by your above verse, I wish to scribble as below:
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
The birth of a poem always arises after an act of deliberation, decision and execution loving and harmless, while grows embraces us silence and we were amazed at the song of the heart and of the dances of the soul expressing verses and rhymes with words not spoken by the obvious.
Maaya Says:
“Mis suspiros atraviesan kilómetros hacia un destino muy lejano, tal vez, por ese anhelo tan querido, me quedé inquieta por un tiempo”
There are poems that come alone into the role without having imagined, written words in a hurry that when we read them we are surprised by the precision that how accurate arrows will direct, not only to the intellect of the readers, also into the heart of the author.
Between darkness and misfortune,
Browse my heart,
Sorrows and disappointments,
The reason was wrecked.
Between words and insults,
Ride the illusion,
Between tears and wailing,
Your heart crashed.
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Entre tinieblas e infortunios,
navega mi corazón,
entre penas y desencantos,
naufragó la razón.
Entre palabras e improperios,
cabalga la ilusión,
entre lágrimas y lamentos,
se estrelló tu corazón.
Greetings, have defined that Act of love that involves the creation of a new poem to perfection.
Dear Lucas,
Very encouraging and imaginative expressions and imaginations, I liked all your reviews, my applause, my love
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank WM for the appreciation and the verses you have written inspired by the poem Birth of a Poem. Lovely and regards.
Mr Lazar loved your explanations and the verses scribbled down. It is so nice of your translations which help to reach to more readers. Thanks & regards. Seasonal greetings !!