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BITTER SWEET...

The bitter sweet sting of salt filled tears,
Shedding insight from broken fears.
Lost on cheeks of those left behind,
Shattered ideals that you cannot find.

Pushing forward with positive scope,
Almost unbearable alone to cope.

You've lost your way your lifeline thread.
Almost impassable this path ahead.

But find compassionate ears help things mellow.
Talking to a friendly fellow.
Your burdens ease your troubled head.
The paths then smoother up ahead.

So tread with ease leave troubles behind.
A lifeline given is always kind.
So don't loose you're thread be it an endless life line,
Talking eases troubles if only whispy and fine.

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Tony Taylor

Hey MAGGIE EVANS!!...... this is so good..... having dealt with bi-polar issues for thirty years...... this write jumped off of the page for me........ it is has great rhythm and timing to its delivery...... and speaks eloquently to its subject matter in well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered phrasing!!......." Almost unbearable alone to cope.."....... yes!!.....ALL STARS!!..... well done sweet poetess!!...... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.  ?

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maggie evans

thank you. I will load up some more this evening. I have 20 plus in note book very similar.thankyou for your kindness x

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