BLEED

The horror of life
Washed over him
Seeped into every pore
Attacked from the inside
And out
Crawled about him
On the floor
More creeping in
From under the door
Bled into him
He opened an artery
Bled it back out.
Marion Price (2019)

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WOW!!.... this is an intensely descriptive poetic portrayal of suicide...... delivered most powerfully with the succinctness that sends it directly into the realm profundity and poetic achievement!!.......ALL STARS!!! & PINNED!!...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo. : )
So glad you liked it Tony, thankyou, sincerely ?