Poem -

BLEED

The horror of life
Washed over him
Seeped into every pore
Attacked from the inside 
And out

Crawled about him
On the floor
More creeping in
From under the door

Bled into him

He opened an artery

Bled it back out.
Marion Price (2019)

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Tony Taylor

WOW!!.... this is an intensely descriptive poetic portrayal of suicide...... delivered most powerfully with the succinctness that sends it directly into the realm profundity and poetic achievement!!.......ALL STARS!!! & PINNED!!...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo. : )

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Marion

So glad you liked it Tony, thankyou, sincerely ?

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