Poem -
BLIND
She reached down
From a great height
To save him
But the black waters
Which once terrified him
Now soothed him
And he no longer had need
Of the light
For he had lost his sight
Completely.
Marion Price(2019)
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Interesting poetry angel
Thankyou Angel, it's about someone who doesn't want to be saved ?
Awww poor soul was blinded :( ❤️❤️❤️
The darkness becomes all he knows. The place they wish to stay.
They have given up trying to climb out of the abyss and have made
it their comfortable friend.. I can relate to this with several people I know.
It is sad that they would rather make friends with the pain then
change to evolve out of it.
violet
Hi Violet..yes, that's is exactly what I was trying to portray, thankyou my friend ?
Absolutely incredible. I don't know if this was the angle you were taking but from where I'm sitting, the man isn't physically blind, but instead can't see a reason to live. Even if that isn't the approach you were taking, this piece of poetry is short, yet by far one of the best poems I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Bravo!
Wow...thankyou D' Angelo that is exactly what I was trying to convey. I don't think IV had the pleasure yet, I will stop by soon and check out your stuff...thankyou my friend ??