Poem -
Blind
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The humming birdβs wing stops in mid flow,
Wild waters lose the will to flow,
Silence burns a catalyst,
Ends the desire,
The stillness of time have stopped the fire,
The cold chill engulfs me,
Blinds my passion,
So I cannot see,
My timing is out of sync,
Now thereβs no looking forward,
There is no looking back,
Clocks have stopped dead in their tracks,
Lost all sense of time,
Now there is no rhythm,
There is no rhyme,
For I donβt know whatβll find,
For without you I am blind,
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Comments
Beautiful...thankyou for sharing ?
Marion,
Thanks this is a poem that stood out for me, it is pure passion of course...
Aaahh saf this is beautiful read!! Well done. Amazing write x
Pratibha thanks again. Will add more tomorrow x
well thought out piece thank you for sharing
Who wants " THE BLIND LEADING THE BLIND " ? Who needs those " BLIND TO THE TRUTH " ? It has to be recognized what is real. And, what is not. For, sake of sanity, and humanity.
If, people do not " WAKE UP TO THE TRUTH " whatever their state, then, all can be lost. Very quickly. To write of your reality, where you are, educates those around you. Of, threat or danger. In the end, all that truly matters is what is fact, as well as what is not.
" TRUTH AND LIGHT " all ways, will guide you. To deny yourself these is to live in perpetual DARK away from what gives to you the most, if not everything. WHY TELL LIES TO YOURSELF WHICH ONLY CAUSE HARM ? Do not cripple yourself, by not seeing what is right, in front of you. See, the effects of those who do not have vision to make more of themselves. Or, anything at all. Do not fall prey to corruption, blinkering you, then blind-folding you.
" BLIND TO REALITY " is permanent struggle. Who wants that ?
Close, informed piece. So enlightening, if you think about all it relates to. Thanks for sharing.
Richard thanks for such a vivid and extensive feedback.Β Proud to announce my first book Eighty-four Pins is a my first collection of Poetry which is available from next week June 1st. It is a collection of sixty poems chosen at the midst of writing poetry.Β A small portion of the profits will go to Cancer Research UK. Please share and order from Amazon.co.uk the ebook is available to pre-order on Kindle, Kobo and Google Books!. Hope you enjoy it. Any reviews will be greatly appreciated.
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