Poem -
Blind
I'm so sorry, for I was blind
While searching, so hard to find
My soul mate, that I did not see
How all this time, you were right in front of me
People they just do not see
How it is you, who completes me
So tonight as my eye's textures melt
From the emotions, my heart felt
I left; caused my own soul to cry
Without my soulmate; I will die
So I called you today; just to say
That I miss you in every possible way
My love I feel so incomplete
Without you; my sweet, sweet
Heart; I swear I will never again leave your side
Because life only has one soul mate to provide
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Comments
I can truly relate...
It truly is sad how blind a human being can beĀ
Beautiful words, Don't let that love go
Xo everything else is an illusion,
But not love.
Thank you Nardine, oh trust me I have no plans on letting him go this time. He is the only one who always stuck by sideĀ
They do say , love is not always someone you can live with,
Rather someone you cannot live without. Xox
That is very true Nardine and when we find the one we can't live without we must not waste our time because time is preciousĀ
Hi Melissa,
Lovely write, my congrats, love the above lines, my applause, my vote
Regards
Willy
Thank you Williams, my turn to check out ur latest works :)
Hey Melissa!!.........hold on sister girl.........when you find your soul mate.........the ride can be magnificently like a roller coastersĀ ups and downs..........ins and outs..........and splendid moments of Wows!!......I like the way you used the a,a,b,b ~ rhyme scheme to express this..........well done girlfriend...........Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Thanks T!! your comments always seem to make my day, and you have no clue how much I missed reading your poetry either.. I am actually trying to explore different techniques for my poetry sometimes it goes well and sometimes not so well, but hey I will eventually be as good as you are :P lol no that is impossible actually because no one could compare to another s writing. But it surely is a compliment having such great poets as you enjoy my work... Lots of loveĀ