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BLIND HUMANITY.

BLIND HUMANITY.

Relentless alarms ring in morning headĀ 
Waking me from my iron bed
Time to work has arrived once moreĀ 
Heavy boots exit mortgaged door

Winter roads in darkened spaceĀ 
Eyes clogged with crystal wasteĀ 
Nodding head to drivers passĀ 
Fading reality through looking glass

Barely arriving to the gates of industryĀ 
leaving behind a gasp for historyĀ 
Dredging through miles of digital red tape
To build this stagnant human state

Fingers wrapped in copper cuffsĀ 
Lungs inhale another door to dustĀ 
The whisper of a workers taleĀ 
Alcohol, drugs and skin so pale

Work and work our hearts to stintĀ 
Feeding the machine of credit printĀ 
Buying and selling our laboured LimbsĀ 
To die in karma and repeat our sins

What is life in this inert vaultĀ 
Breeding our young to shackle and boltĀ 
Praying to a God made in ego mindĀ 
Seeking peace in a world gone blind.Ā Ā 

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Shaun Cronick

A brilliant write Gerard and one that tells of the reality of it all .
Not just the repeated drudgery toil of the 9-5 but of the constant labours from the cradle to the grave.
The hamster on the wheel who knows its predicament but alas can't get off.
For the needle returns to the start of the song and we all sing along like before.
Great write and full honours for telling how it forever is and feels and pinned to read again.

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Nine Eleven

Thank you Shaun, for reading and understanding humanity's prison, its a tough pill to swallow, its easier to Bury our heads in the sand than to deal with the reality of life on earth.

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Syd

Absolutely awesome Gerard!Ā 
I totally understand and agree with the message. Brilliantly written šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

- Syd

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Neville

Sadly and indeed, ever so, very muchly enjoyed .. For both the record and what it might otherwise be worth, I came here by recommendation & was not disappointed .. NevilleĀ 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

with four stints in my heart, I can relate! really cool write Nine Eleven!.........Jim

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Marion

The weariness and resignation you have managed to convey in this write is quite astounding NE. I feel it all and you are right...blind humanity...exactly right.
A razor sharp write my friend x

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