Poem -
blood mixers in spilt white wine
Does heaven keep a place for me?
I pray so for
I think
I see
The path
the fairy stones that reach above
the gate and tree and go up up
away to clouds where angels light
the sky up on my moonless nights
I see it oh I do I do, see all the
loves I've lost... with you,
a'shine a'shine at heavens gate
does heaven wait, IĀ think it waits
but each time that I try to climb,
a bottle drops, the crashes chime
with blood mixers in spilt white
wine
the stone cold path says...
Not Your Time
then dawn arrives in raging storm
locks me down in ever morn
and all the fairy steps are gone
and cold I am laid out forlone,
to stay
M P 5/2/22
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I have came to the conclusion that faith and I aren't meant to be on the same page right now but not out of laziness but just because I cannot wrap my mind around what I cannot prove. I can see both arguments to the topic but what I have concluded is ....... I will live a life based on being proud of myself and if eventually I'm before a God when my time comes then I'll have nothing to worry about. I found religion being such a distraction that it prevented me from growing because I used it as a crutch versus relying on myself to fix me. You're a beautiful person Marion and we are allowed to be selfish or not be perfect all the time, regardless your beliefs or faith ....You need to be the best you can be for YOURSELF and whatever you find motivating for that , that's what you should believe in ! We don't need to have all the answers NOW but we cannot waste precious time by waiting . Very relatable poem, it hit close to home for me. ā¤ļøRobĀ
Hi Rob...what a lovely indepth answer. For myself I have no idea what I believe Rob.I need to believe there is somewhere because I seriously cannot love with the idea that I will never see my beautiful son again. However, like you I struggle on a daily basis and if there us something more I am very fkn angry with it. Somedays I write rage...disbelief, and then belief again. This write though is more about the internal struggle of simply not wanting to be here and be part of it all.Ā
I am not religious and don't believe in A god. Quite simply I.dont know what to believe anymore...thanks love...it's nice to interact on here, there is so little involvement anymore...take care š
Hey MARION!!......I know the feeling all too well....ya know, I've said to you on more than one occasion ~ "I know exactly what you mean" and I'm not saying that to be kind......I have lost two sisters and my father.....and I had a suicide attempt 31 years ago.......Hell ~ Heaven Can Wait!!.....there is so much to learn here.....and I gotta tell you.....I LOVE learning new things.....one of the things I have learned is that ANYTHING that is conceivable in this life IS possible.....by that thinking ~ you WILL see him again!!.....your writing is truly special!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoĀ : )
Thankyou for your wise and inspiring words Tony...sorry for late reply...appreciated x
wow Marion! awesome!........................................................................Jim
Thanks so much Jim..bless you x
Hi Marion,
Trials and tribulations seem to be part and parcel of the human experience.
Sucks, I know. Hopefully thereās a point. Wonderful write!
Hopefully there is a point John...hopefully. thankyou my friend x