Poem -
Bloody Tears
As the bloody tears, trickle down my cheeks
For the man I have not touched in weeks
Though he appears, in my dreams
To end my tear flooded streams I kiss his face, in the attempt to erase
The, bloody tears trickling down my face I cry, oh how bloody hard I cry
Inside this weakness I may die
Please God I beg of you
To give me another chance, to gaze into his eyes so blue
I swear I will treat him right
Hold him tight every night
I will wipe away his tears
If only he appears to dissipate my deepest fears
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Comments
beautifully written, Poetic....straight from the heart with honesty, not holding back....your words are released like doves as bloody tears roll down, wonderful imagery, capturing the essence of true unselfish love at the end....felt the simplicity and purity of this write, so well done pulls at the heart strings
I swear I will treat him right
Hold him tight every night
I will wipe away his tears
Thanks Chris for the beautiful comment!
Hey Heart!!........I agree with Correia..........could feel the powerful honesty conveyed here........some VERY striking phrasing here as well............."Inside this weakness I may die.."..............well done girlfriend!!..............smiles.............T xo
Thanks T, I swear I am drowning in a pool of emotional despair LOL
Hi Poetic Heart,
I appreciate your honesty in life and braveness in love, good write, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thanks William
Good write "Though he appears, in my dreams
To end my tear flooded streams I kiss his face, in the attempt to erase" i like these lines well done.