BLUE MOON
I tried so hard
to wake up the moon
I whispered... don't give up
don't you give up... too soon
don't you despair now, beyond
in the gloom
but I watched the moon dim
like a tired broken bulb
watched as it hid behind
grey rolling clouds
the night deep in sorrow
the dark a sad shroud
I was desperate now
my voice getting loud
the world would be less
without you I cried
you are worthwhile and lush
like the stars and the sun
please stay with me here
don't you dare think to run
for your colours are magic
could not be replaced
there is nothing at all
that could match that sweet
face
you are friend to me always
I will help you through pain
I care not at all
if you wax or you wane
I love you I cried out
to the darkness around
but only hush answered
there was no other sound
I wept then...
all alone in the dark
Marion Price(2020)
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Beautiful and intriguing. Fabulous, as always x
Thanks so much Tina 💕
So awesome!
Thanks love 💕
U r so awesome Marion ❤️💕❤️
Pinned but u would guess thatun xxx
Thankyou lovely lady 💖
❤️💙❤️just wrote one bout my missing strolling me beaches pml n ended up craying haha must b low teehee 💕💙💕
I know Jill...nothing is sure anymore, well, it never was but at least we had the comfort of illusion before covid. I have lost my sense of smell...I didn't believe this could happen before I got infected but I am shocked to find it is true. No sense of smell!!! One of the previous five senses...vanished!!! Hope you feel.better soon..i.am.here privately also as you know ok. I'm going to.pop over and read now 💜💙❤️
Awwwwwwww OMG Marion well believe it or not I have just read this out to my hubby n I’m in tears my lovely ..... God I pray you okay n I’m not religious but do believe in prayers do work when we call out for hope & faith ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'm ok love, had a day or two of really bad flu symptoms and temp but I'm not breathless thank.god!! I'm not layed up either ...nothing a paracetamol.isnt dealing with, at the moment anyway but Jill, ridiculously, I am so angry and want my sense of smell BACK!!! Thankyou very much!!! I can't imagine not being able to smell the roses, so to speak.!! Lol...so.i have written one about being angry!! Was going to.put note in that it was inspired by you but then people would think that you inspired my anger...lol...so.i didn't 😆😆💖💖
Awwwww ❤️❤️❤️ So thinking about you my lovely ❤️❤️❤️
As ALWAYS Miss MARION!!....there are some fantastic phrases running throughout this write........with which you have created a magical melancholy to add to the tone of this finely crafted piece of poetic sadness ~
~ "But only hush answered
there was no other sound..."
ALL STARS & PINNED!!......VERY well crafted work here dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Thankyou so much my friend, appreciated as always 💕
Aha, Marion! There is a beautiful Chinese song "Moon expresses my feelings", and maybe I'm going to translate it just for you to enjoy! You're definitely a beautiful Moon Lady.
Oh I do hope you do...it's sounds like something I would love to read. Let me know if you do as I wouldn't want to miss it. Thanks so much love...X
Even empathy for the moon! Thank you for sharing the beauty you see !....................Jim
And thankyou for taking the time to read and comment my friend, appreciated Jim x