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Blueberry Jill.

On blueberry hill.
That's where i met Jill.
I was fetching a pail of water.
She looked sad so i asked her what is the matter.
She said her lover jack has left her.
And that ever since he fell on his head a crazy look on his face he did always wear.
I told her my name is drew.
And told her i want her to be my beau.
We started walking down blueberry hill hand in hand.
Then suddenly half way down in front of us a foaming at the mouth jack did stand.
He started to shout.
And wave a kitchen knife about.
Then like the old nursery rhyme says jack again fell down the hill.
This time he died and i was able to live a jack free life with my beau jill.

 

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The fish of the sea

I actually really enjoyed this one. Seemingly interesting way to connect reality with a nursery rhyme. I was had to tell them apart. Nice blend Will! Smiles always.

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