Poem - 13 February 2018, 08:53

Boat

Boat

Frozen
Stuck in place
Not held down but
Frozen
Unable to move
Seeing open water but
It’s too far.
But
Maybe we’re happy
Where we are

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ℙ𝕠𝕖𝕥𝕖𝕤𝕤𝕕𝕒𝕣𝕜𝕝𝕪13 February 2018, 09:22

it is a pleasure to read your work, welcome to CosmoFunnel

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KelliH13 February 2018, 14:15

Thank you kindly.

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Penny13 February 2018, 14:23

A lovely piece. Welcome to Cosmofunnel
Penny

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ℙ𝕠𝕖𝕥𝕖𝕤𝕤𝕕𝕒𝕣𝕜𝕝𝕪1003 months ago

Penny1003 months ago

Likes...

Penny 3 months ago

ℙ𝕠𝕖𝕥𝕖𝕤𝕤𝕕𝕒𝕣𝕜𝕝𝕪 3 months ago

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