Poem -
Breakfast Rituals
Breakfast Rituals
After breakfast
and without so much as
even thinking
He half turned and placed
the very
tenderest of kisses upon her
right temple ..
Then, they just stood there
side by side
Deep in contemplation for
a moment ..
Until something clicked and
he resumed
the rinsing and she began
to dry the used
fine china breakfast dishes ..
Those reserved for
Sunday mornings, such as these
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Comments
What a tender moment captured in the lense of a poem! Awesome work x
dont'cha just love em .. tender moments that is ... awesome feels good too .. so bless ya and truly BM .. x
wonderful poem
Bless you Greg .. Many thanks indeed mate :) N
Morning Neville, you captured that stillness in a moment shared, where two just sink into each other for a second. Those little things we take for granted during mundane chores in life. You showed the beauty in the mundane my friend. A wonderful, clever write
Gwen x
You know wot .. this page just wouldn't be the same without your seal of approval Gwen ................................................................. thank you :) x
Awe nah Neville, it is that Cosmo becomes a huge joy to read, when writers like yourself continue to post such wonderful works :) x
:) xx
STELLAR!!......capturing and conveying moments seems a part of your forte' my friend......you do it amazingly well........PINNED for perfection!!.....LOVE this NEVILLE!!.....'nuff said!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Thank you my dear literary friend & poet .. indeed its always good to feel you have been near ... Neville :)
What can I say that has not been said here already, you do actually paint real moments with your words...a talent to be proud of Neville x
When we first met Marion, I remember saying how kind I thought you were .. and do you know what .. some things never change .. Bless you my friend n true x