Breaking down

When I am breaking down.
I can only hear that sound.Â
It echos off the walls,
through the doorways and the halls.
Deep inside I only scream.
I wish this was a dream.
I have lost every ounce of trust.
My hopes and dreams have turned to dust.
I don't know why I keep fighting.
There's proof there's no point trying.
I am looked inside a cage,
with demons filled with rage.
I am dreaming every night,
of some other kind of life.
I am trapped inside my skin,
in a world consumed by sin.
I am dreaming every night,
of somebody else's life
*wrote this a couple months ago but I still wanted to share
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very emotional write linda hope things are getting better?
They are much better, thank you Linda.
Hi Danielle, when we write it is often assumed that we ourselves are experiencing what we have written- if that is the case here then I really hope things have improved for you since you wrote it- if it isn't the case then you have captured that feeling of sadness, depression and hopelessness really well and with great imagination!..5 stars for this emotional ink!! Thank you for sharing
Lodigiana xx
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Thank you so much Lodigiana, you are very right at the time I was very much experiencing what I wrote. Glad to say things are much better now.
Love this girl. Awesome write! <3
Thanks girl, that means so much! <3
This is wonderful. Great job expressions emotions! _katryna
Thanks you Katryna! You encouragement is deeply appreciated!
Well written,clearly from the ❤️Â
Thanks so much Keith!Â