Poem -

Breaking Recovery

When your drowning in emotions untold,
You always hear them ask "What's wrong?"
You know they couldn't handle the noose tied so tight,
Unable to form anything but "I'm Fine!" 
When they finally have a chance, 
They fight to bring you back, 
Away from dark voices trekking you on, 
You hear them tell you
"I'll listen, What's wrong?" 
You go crashing back down when they make it seem so small

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Being Me

I can relate to this. That last line! A perfect last line to this poem. Well written x

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Marion

Got to agree with BM here... love the last two lines x

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