Breaking The Fall (NYC Version)

This Separation Between Us
By Experience In Years
And Wisdom In Age, Yet
So Much A Like, Are You And I
Believing In Love, To Only Be Hurt
From Lies In Which, Our Hearts Break
Falling And Falling, Time And Again
For A Love, That Keeps Using Us
Giving Breath, To A Loving Lust
Instead Of Loves, Heartbreaking Fall
You're Experience In Age, Rivals
My Wisdom In Years, By The Feelings
Being Felt, Through These Hands
From Which We Speak, About
Those Emotions, We Left Behind
For A Lusting Love, We Portray
So We Never Again, Fall In Love
With The Hearts, Of Those Who Lie
This Separation Between Us, Influenced
From, So Many Years And Memories
Yet, My Experience In Age
And, Your Wisdom In Years
Matter Not, When Lusting Love
Is The Only Love, Left, We Feel
To Prevent Falling
For Another Heart That Lies.....
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This is amazing!!..... just superbly delivered poetry....... Love and heartbreak!!...... wish I had more time to keep up with your stuff JERRED!!.......its mysterious...... that age and wisdom thing....... experiences counting passing time!!...... you've grown so much since last I read you..... in caliber.... and strength of phrasing......smokin' grooves brother poet!!.......ALL STARS!!..... well done!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?
Mr Taylor,
Thank You Kind Sir, Your Always To Gracious With Your Words. I Will Tell You That My ADD Does The Writing, Its My Creative Side For Sure. Most Everything Is Always First Drafts, I Sit Down And Just Write Whats Comes To Mind First. I First Started Writing Through My Divorce, And Was In A Deep Place Back Then, My Writing Has Progressed Through The Life And Changes Since Then, Depression, To Finding Myself Again, Then For My Daughter, And Then For Songwriting. As You Can See, My Mood In My Writing Has Changed, And I Can Thank That To My Darling Isabella, My Daughter, And Age. Thank You Sir For The Kind Words, It Means A Lot To Me, As I Put My Life, And Soul Into My Writing, No Holds Barred, Raw Emotions, Best Way For Me To Write.
Best Regards
Jerred Coleman
Jerred, poignant, layered thought provoking poem, you really had my mind drifting to places familiar, I guess that can happen with reader and poet; having similar experiences, intriguing tone comes out of this one for me as well; a calm acceptance of reality...no rose colored glasses illusions to cloud perception....a realistic sobering point of view on relationships, intriguing well written, I like this one a lot, makes me think....cheers man, hope you are enjoying the season, tribute
Happy Holidays to you as well Chris, thanks for the kind words, I write from experience, and memories like you said, if you do that, people will be able to relate, as most people have been there before. I wrote this about a woman, everyone knows, yet I can't say who. She is so relate able to me from the same love lost and found as lost again, so with my ADD I say down an said hey, I give up lie for lust to save my heart from breaking again, but the lust like hers, is just a cover for the love we both are still trying to find.