Poem -
Breath Of Fresh Air
Coming to me like a breath of fresh air,
When this life was more than I could bear
You took my heart and made it your own
Giving my soul a wondrous new home,
Where I could abandon my past to be free,
Where a magical new world opened up to me !
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Coming to me like a breath of fresh air,
You showed me the dreams we could share,
Giving me so much that I could believe in
Blurring a line where reality and fantasy begin.
You were the reason everything turned around
Being with you I realize what beauty can be found.
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Hello Richard...
I'm sure I don't have to tell you...
Very Sweet Write!
Beautiful for sure!
Thank you for sharing!
Hug!!
:)
sparrowsong
Hug !
Work it!! Own it!! Work it!! Own it!! (lol)....... geez Sir Waters,.......... you have really been pouring your heart out about this angel in your life lately......... this is the kind of inspiration that most writers dream of......... the kind that makes it fun to write........... the kind that makes you better than you thought you could be.......... when the words are pleasurable little tools that can barely express why it is you're trying to convey......... so happy for you my friend........... and happy to be on the reading end of these loving vignettes............. well done captain, oh my captain!!.............. Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
You explain my predicament well ! Words are not enough to express my love and gratitude for the one who pulled me back from the brink ! Still trying to come up with a poem I am entirely satisfied with to convey what I feel for her !!! :)
Thank you so much for reading my works ! Your comments are always much appreciated.
Take care.
:)
honest outpouring of love and gratitude, great message in song, Richard....you are very blessed my friend, keep enjoying your wonderful gift of inspiration, and thank you for sharing as well....cheers
I count my blessings every day ! Without my loves support I would not be here now.
Wishing you all the best my friend ! :)
Hey Richard. You poured your heart out on this one . I feel it on every line .it is not every day when someone comes into your life and changes your life forever . That love is everlasting and I am glad she is there for you . Much love and respect for this write .your friend rock
Thank you for your kind words !
Take care my friend ! :)
This is a breath of fresh air for us all Richard. I admire the tribute and expression of love for the one your one that has pulled you from the fire of your destruction, it is very inspiring my friend. Love like that is never in question of untrue. So happy for you and the muse that gives you yhe reason to write and bless us with your words. So much love and respect to you, always a friend D.
Take care my friend ! :)