Poem -
Breathe
Breathe
one more time my love
I just need
to hear you sigh ..
Breathe
one more time for me
my love
I need to see
both your chest and belly
rise in time
With those gentle
undulations ..
Like two
fallen sparrows might
In their
single quest to taste the sky
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Great poem
Cheers Greg, much appreciated kind sir N :)
Gosh Neville, do I empathise with this poem. So sad when we find ourselves desperately wanting them to live just a moment more.
"With those gentle
undulations ..
Like two
fallen sparrows might
In their
single quest to taste the sky"
Poetic genius right here. This is beautiful imagery, even though the subject matter is so very sad. Your words reflect the beauty Beholden of the person observed in this fabulous write. Oozing love and devotion
Just a gem of a poem
Gwen x
I am more than merely honoured our Gwen, much more .. Thank you so very bloomin BIGLY .. Here, have this X and a gentle HUG from me to thee :)
Neville x
This is a very poignant write Neville, a beautiful and gentle plea...
one last time...
for me...
Stunning x
I am so glad you found my little scribble Marion & even more so that it meets with your approval xx
Lots of e.ogion captured in this. I picture two livers in this. You write sooooo very well x
Good Mane to you & my very sincerest thanks for checking in like this .. Such visitations are always more than welcome Tina and I subsequently wish you & yours all the very bestest of AGT's
Neville x