Poem - 05 February 2017, 01:17

Bridge

Deep ocean;
Islands of flowers
With laughter;
In the eye of the storm
Swells of love and hate
Tides of letting go
Loving kindness ~
The Lord has spoken
Be good to your fellow man
For evil is the devil;
Is hope not an angel in heaven
Deep ocean
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I see a rainbow ? across the
....the bridge of hope

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Destiny

Poetry Genre:

Comedy Verse

Topic:

The Soul

9 comments

Comments

Richard Waters05 February 2017, 05:47

Bridges are there to bring people together !

Great write with an interesting structure leading to a fulfilling conclusion. Hope is what many need to overcome adversity.

Warmest wishes. :)

Jai Masters05 February 2017, 11:26

Thank you Richard - we all need that bit of hope > despair

All the best for you on this weekend -

kind rgs Jai:)

Richard Waters05 February 2017, 15:41

All the best to you ! :)

Take care.

Jai Masters05 February 2017, 16:02

Thank you.

Best wishes Jai:)

Richard Waters05 February 2017, 16:05

Tony Taylor05 February 2017, 10:46

YES!! JAI MASTERS!!.....Amen bro!!.....I'm always sueprised at your most interesting formatting......always helping the write convey its intent......HEY!!...its SUPERBOWL SUNDAY here......so Everyone is drinking beer and partying......wish you were here.......great read on piece brother poet!!.......Fist full of STARS!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?☀✴✳

Jai Masters05 February 2017, 11:30

What is Super Bowl Sunday like >

Patriots vs Falcons! ?? Go USA

Who will win?

Thank you ?