Poem -
Butterfly
Peaceful sweeping beauty
Silent as the breeze
I see how you flutter, butterfly
Singing past me.
Not long till you retire'
Yet so young since you were born
Collecting every sweet smell you find
As you carry yourself along.
A stillness in your beauty
A lightness in your touch
A softness in your kindness
You never ask for much
Peaceful singing butterfly
Still silent as the breeze
I watch you floating by meΒ
And wish I was only thee.
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Comments
Very eloquent, flows beautifullyΒ
Thank you very muchΒ
:)
Eloquent elegant enchanting and engaging work. Great.
Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to more from you.
Best wishes. Β :)
Thank you so much.
Its so nice to have positive comments :)Β
:) You can only be positive about poetry like this !
Take care.
Hey Gabrielle!!......a most lovely write..... love the choice in formatting...... helped the lovely flow you've created here....... loved everything except the last line...... just me....... no offense intended.......ALL STARS!!..... perfect rhythm and timing here....... well done..... and .....WELCOME to COSMO!!..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.Β ?β³β΄β
Thank you :) and I was'nt sure of last line either at first . Like I said earlier it's lovely to have positive feedback :)Β
Soft, peaceful and very beautiful. Enjoyed reading very much xx :-)
Thank you very much :)Β
Made me think of all those nice summer days in the countryside. Warming and well written!
Thank u glad it helped u create that memory :)