Death By Pathos
I need to find a subject that grips the old heart strings,
I need to write of something, and hope that maybe brings
the eye of judges on me
and hope that they will see,
that I can write of tragic things and reading them they’ll be
so moved about my sadness, or fury for a cause,
that they will pick my poem and I’ll hear their applause.
Now shall I write of feeling that my life holds naught for me,
or maybe baby lambs are being butchered for my tea,
or even that my heart is broken as my true love died
and nothing can console the aching emptiness inside.
Perhaps I’ll write of feeling like I am of no real worth,
or maybe of a comet that is heading towards earth,
and what about poor donkeys who are made to slave all day?
I’m sure that there is plenty more that I could find to say.
But somehow something stops me, I can hear my conscience shout,
‘No! No! please don’t do that -it’s not what poetry’s about!'
To blackmail ones emotions and stifle what should be
an open celebration of one persons literacy.
Ok perhaps the spelling isn’t everything we’d would hope,
and if the punctuation’s poor I’m sure we all can cope.
A poem’s words should fill the reader with just raw emotion
that fills their mind with images, ideas and brand new notions.
So if this is all captured in a work that is contrived,
then I will try to write one too…
and submit it up with pride!!!
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This made me wryly smile hun..I understand exactly where you are coming from! A great write thats says so much more than mere words can! xx
I knew you would suss it out immediately..the only thing I dont have is being a 'newby' ..too long on the site now to ever qualify for that..still one lives in hope hey hun?glad it made you smile -thats enough for me.
I really enjoyed this piece, a piece of a poem, or a story to be told, what is it, what will become of this seed you have planted, I'm sure a splendid forest full of life and death.
Thanks for sharing Stevie.
You're very welcome Gerard...although not quite sure where it will end up but it will be fun getting there maybe! Thanks pal for reading and commenting.