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CAMARADERIE

CAMARADERIE

Travail to endure in this frame
Your absence created an emptiness.

Lifeless ambiance in the world of verses.
Colorless flowers blooming around.

Awaiting for the warmth of your light
To release me into the wilderness.

Absorbing in your  camaraderie  a delight
Short severance creating distaste in my flavors.

Longing for those amusing conversations
once created ripples of liveliness in  my life.

Flowers withered  in the absence  of your aura
Many hearts in anguish regarding your safe return

This chasm of  your being created an exhaustion
in my thoughts flowing out as verses.

My mind enthralled to ponder the enchanted lands
Awaiting for your return to kiss me  and to be alive .

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Poetess 
Piusha Singh,

The above verse is very familiar to my spiritual readings.  The image attached to the verse is superb and very apt to the poem. A feeling of human worship with a flame is very symbolic. Good write. My applause.

Awaiting for the warmth of your light ( A mutual trust and friendship from the divine power )
To release me into the wilderness. ( means  external life of eagerness and pleasure)

Absorbing in your  camaraderie  a delight ( a goodwill and light-hearted rapport between or among friends )
Short severance creating distaste in my flavors. ( Spirit of friendly good-fellowship )

 Reading between the lines: This  poem spreads and inspires a modern outlook towards a  world for a better expression of love and unity; a way of life within  mutual friendship and trust between individuals to be  in togetherness for  a long period of time.

Longing for those amusing conversations
once created ripples of liveliness in  my life.

This message is for  a formulation of an  easy way of affording sociability and familiarity within our spiritual environment.  

Regards  & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Mark Pearson

Avery nice and loving way to see spring, 5 from me,lovely write,

Regards Mak x

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piusha singh

WOW William, I  really  appreciate the way you dissect the poems and show the different parts uniquely.And my deep gratitude for your kind review. I enjoy reading your analysis.And most of the time you are right.I  really  want to learn your way analysis and interpretation of verses William.Hat's off to you.

Cheers.

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piusha singh

Thnxxx  dear Mark ,You made my day with this lovely remarks.Let this spring  lots of happy shine there in U.K as well...

Cheers!!!

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Poetess 
Piusha Singh,

You are growing like a deep routed " Poetree ". Everybody will get a chance to grow and to enrich with fruits of their own. Be polite, Be calm, I breathe poetry in every second, minute,  every hour, Almost. why ? Because of my passion towards art, literature since 40 years period.  As our life style and status goes up and turn to be on  increasing trend, we need to grow stronger, towards good; our faith stronger, our resolution stronger, our love to human stronger. This is opposed to our being strong in our own strength. We must do the will of God, before we receive the promises, for which reason we have need of patience. Together with our prayers for others, we should have understanding in all things, we must exhort and stir them up to consider what we hear, write and read.This is the message from your poem " CAMARADERIE. Keep on writing with an open mind and free will.. 

My applause, My Vote 5*, My Nomination 

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Poetess 
Piusha Singh,

Congrats on your winning nomination of your poem " Camaraderie " , Good if you could avoid BLOCK Letters while typing  poetry titles. Learn Adobe Photoshop and impress with beautiful fonts for title name and author name. Your poetry page will look beautiful. This is only a humble suggestion, please 

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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piusha singh

Hi William ,thnxxx  for your love and support.

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piusha singh

Oh dear Cherie I m overwhelmed by your lovely remarks.

Love yaa...

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