Poem -
CAMARADERIE
Travail to endure in this frame
Your absence created an emptiness.
Lifeless ambiance in the world of verses.
Colorless flowers blooming around.
Awaiting for the warmth of your light
To release me into the wilderness.
Absorbing in your camaraderie a delight
Short severance creating distaste in my flavors.
Longing for those amusing conversations
once created ripples of liveliness in my life.
Flowers withered in the absence of your aura
Many hearts in anguish regarding your safe return
This chasm of your being created an exhaustion
in my thoughts flowing out as verses.
My mind enthralled to ponder the enchanted lands
Awaiting for your return to kiss me and to be alive .
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Comments
Dear Poetess
Piusha Singh,
The above verse is very familiar to my spiritual readings. The image attached to the verse is superb and very apt to the poem. A feeling of human worship with a flame is very symbolic. Good write. My applause.
Reading between the lines: This poem spreads and inspires a modern outlook towards a world for a better expression of love and unity; a way of life within mutual friendship and trust between individuals to be in togetherness for a long period of time.
This message is for a formulation of an easy way of affording sociability and familiarity within our spiritual environment.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Avery nice and loving way to see spring, 5 from me,lovely write,
Regards Mak x
WOW William, I really appreciate the way you dissect the poems and show the different parts uniquely.And my deep gratitude for your kind review. I enjoy reading your analysis.And most of the time you are right.I really want to learn your way analysis and interpretation of verses William.Hat's off to you.
Cheers.
Thnxxx dear Mark ,You made my day with this lovely remarks.Let this spring lots of happy shine there in U.K as well...
Cheers!!!
Dear Poetess
Piusha Singh,
You are growing like a deep routed " Poetree ". Everybody will get a chance to grow and to enrich with fruits of their own. Be polite, Be calm, I breathe poetry in every second, minute, every hour, Almost. why ? Because of my passion towards art, literature since 40 years period. As our life style and status goes up and turn to be on increasing trend, we need to grow stronger, towards good; our faith stronger, our resolution stronger, our love to human stronger. This is opposed to our being strong in our own strength. We must do the will of God, before we receive the promises, for which reason we have need of patience. Together with our prayers for others, we should have understanding in all things, we must exhort and stir them up to consider what we hear, write and read.This is the message from your poem " CAMARADERIE. Keep on writing with an open mind and free will..
My applause, My Vote 5*, My Nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear Poetess
Piusha Singh,
Congrats on your winning nomination of your poem " Camaraderie " , Good if you could avoid BLOCK Letters while typing poetry titles. Learn Adobe Photoshop and impress with beautiful fonts for title name and author name. Your poetry page will look beautiful. This is only a humble suggestion, please
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hi William ,thnxxx for your love and support.
Oh dear Cherie I m overwhelmed by your lovely remarks.
Love yaa...