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carnival of madness.

As i opened the door,
It slammed back shut,
The shutters closed with a clash,
What's going on here,
Loud music began to play,
The light from the window gone away,
A carnival of madness,
Locked away,
Chains now bound me to the chair,
I'm floating in mid-air,
The pictures on the walls are moving,
Alive inside my room,
I think I've gone to fare now,
No more experimental,
Mushrooms.

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Steve Green

Very clever title capped off nicely by a far out finish

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Tony Taylor

Nardine I really like this....I especially love the ending......well done .......tony

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Ravindra Kumar

Nice,..enjoyed well..beauty of skilled imagination,..like the poem.

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