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Carousell

It is not at all merry
On the going around
The merry
Being somewhat 
A good ways up front
Still...optimists that we are
We keep chasing it's head
Going round round and round
Till our poor horse drops dead

M P 19/11/22

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Jim "The Lad" ....

and the wagon wheels loose tread! lol! love it Marion!..............................Jim

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Marion

Hey Jim, I Hooe you are very well. Thankyou my friend x

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Marion

They are still quite jammy though..😆.thanks Jim x

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Being Me

A trillion, gazillion stars for this one!! It is absolutely brilliant. Short, but it says what it wants to and delivers that literary sword — run through perfectly. Fan- bloody-tastic x

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Marion

Thankyou Tina, carousels are the most beautiful things aren't they? Sadly they are a dying breed of horse these days xx

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Being Me

They are! Very beautiful x

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