Poem -
Chain of love
He's taken my heart
but doesn't he's the one
I've been frozen with the ice
burned by the sun
As day and night evolve
With the earth and the moon
My heart beats more than the rhythm
Can this love move in soon.....
The moonlight and stars
Are far in the sky
Like his love for me..
breaks veins in my eyes...
Tears on silence in dreams beyond
Times the teller if the heart is fond
Breaking the bond of friendship can be doom
Angels of truth ,fire loves arrow soon...
Free the chains of pain
Let love take its path
Free mind ,soul and body...
Break my silence at last....
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Hey Tina!!.........I've always enjoyed your ink.........in this one i felt like I got to see some unrevealed part of yourself........as though it were difficult for you to write this.........I'm probably wrong in my assumption but I came away from this feeling like i had read a page or two in your journal...........compelling stuff my friend...........well done,.............smiles............T xo
Great insight Tony.....was difficult but I have deeper....its getting it in pen to paper ,only the slightest is this write .....not my true self and way I write so you are 100% on the mark that somethings wrong....
This poem is for my son whos battling depression....doesn't believe that the ones closest are the ones who always save him...he doesn't realise that hes loved very much...if only he would....xx
Hey a very emotional but beautiful write .I have battled depression in my life off and on . I thinking writing is one way of dealing with it ,music is another but walking is my all time favorite for some stress relief. Hugs to you and my respect rock
So very true Hardrocklover ,learning the guitar helped a lot in the situation ...without it I would say things could be worse :) thank you
Tina x
Go raibth maith agat.....Thank you ! a painful time that still lasted after but calmed.... the pen can write the ink deep to the skin as it can to paper....the release fights the mind ,body and soul....self love ,strength and all that comes with being a poet...its not all clear in the write but after a freedom can be felt in all poets emerging from pain...it just takes a strength no one can understand....I wrote what I felt...I feel ...I will feel.... Tina x