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Natures Religion

Natures Religion

Seems religion takes the world by its brains...
Can say I feel the same......taken in...its all the same
who says sin is how we should feel?...with this deal...
Life is broken...times have spoken on how we should be...
yet the past has crept up and teased those that see...
Religion has buried ...but hurried those in its path
To make choices for next century to last...
Time gone on has not made history change...
Not one person who spoke ...anything gained...
Life is love...love is life...
But not one ...can take truth and gain...
Old times ,new life ,live for the person within...
To begin the life of a person without sin...  
  

  

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Tony Taylor

YES!! TINA!!...... all though I can't say I agree with every single line.....I DO agree that it is within...... where we find the freedom to find that peace within our own belief system....... ultimately paving the way to greet our death with Love of self in our hearts ........free from the worry of sin.......a brilliant piece of poetic advice.......it's interesting .......I wrote a piece VERY similar just recently....... fist full-o-STARS!!......LOVE your stuff girlfriend!!....... high fives!!.......LÔVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo  ✴? ♥

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Tina Moore

Thank you Tony ,the past seems to creep up in all nations with religion and within our own self is the answer not to be swayed back to the past.Religion  is ok as long as its not used as a weapon.... All the great speakers in life have a blind eye turned on them and a deaf ear ,so its time to feel within and think of the future..... love has to win at the end.... :) x

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