Change is like the seasons
Moving into each one
In perfect transition
You don't see it
It just occurs
So effortlessly
And when it happens
You don't even realise it's here
Hi Pratibha!
Beautiful. I love that picture, too. Very profound, and thought-provoking. You're smart, and fun, and great. Hope you are well.
Hugs,
Matthew.
Thanks Matthew. Really appreciate your comments. Cant believe how quickly it took me to write this one. I am well and getting on cosmo whenever I can. Hope you are doing well. Px
Hi Marion. Yes back and getting on here whenever I can! Thank you for the support. I'm really glad you liked it! This didnt take me long to write at all...the beauty of short pieces hey!! Px?
Pratibha what a lovely peice, just a Autumn begins to take hold. You captured the change in seasons perfectly. A gorgeous poem! Good luck with your book!
Hey Sarfraz. Thank you for the lovely comments. Wanted to write a short piece and this was it. My first book is out on 1st oct! Its exciting! Thanks for asking. Px?
Well now, Pratibha, short poems are really difficult to do. (To do well I mean). And you have pulled it off perfectly. A very short but very profound poem. Well written. It's good you're back x
Oh wow Tina thank you for that lovely compliment. I wouldnt have thought anything as this one didnt take me long to write at all. But to know I have excuted a short poem well gives me much confidence ?
I didnt even consider myself a poet until I joined this site in april and gained feedback on my writing which had never ever been read by anyone before until this year.
Thank you kindly for your support and its lovely to be back and reading everyone else's writes! Px?
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Hi Pratibha!
Beautiful. I love that picture, too. Very profound, and thought-provoking. You're smart, and fun, and great. Hope you are well.
Hugs,
Matthew.
Thanks Matthew. Really appreciate your comments. Cant believe how quickly it took me to write this one. I am well and getting on cosmo whenever I can. Hope you are doing well. Px
Hey lovely girl...you are back!! A short and oh so beautiful write of truth and wisdom...hugs ?
Hi Marion. Yes back and getting on here whenever I can! Thank you for the support. I'm really glad you liked it! This didnt take me long to write at all...the beauty of short pieces hey!! Px?
Pratibha what a lovely peice, just a Autumn begins to take hold. You captured the change in seasons perfectly. A gorgeous poem! Good luck with your book!
Hey Sarfraz. Thank you for the lovely comments. Wanted to write a short piece and this was it. My first book is out on 1st oct! Its exciting! Thanks for asking. Px?
Well now, Pratibha, short poems are really difficult to do. (To do well I mean). And you have pulled it off perfectly. A very short but very profound poem. Well written. It's good you're back x
Oh wow Tina thank you for that lovely compliment. I wouldnt have thought anything as this one didnt take me long to write at all. But to know I have excuted a short poem well gives me much confidence ?
I didnt even consider myself a poet until I joined this site in april and gained feedback on my writing which had never ever been read by anyone before until this year.
Thank you kindly for your support and its lovely to be back and reading everyone else's writes! Px?
You're very welcome x
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Nice one P.
You're a star.
Terry.
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Thank you Terry that's very kind.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ right back at you too!!
We all love getting them x
short but lovely. and you were right same wavelength
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A nice lovely comparison between change in the world and the changing seasons. Kudos for a great one in brevity.
plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
Thank you kindly!
Will do ?
Lovely just lovely
Thank you Liliana! Most appreciative Px?
A great short poem , every word knows its place and makes a very compact flowing piece , Well done Pratibha , Great write ! Cx
Thank you Chris!! The master of short poems....means alot. I ? Px?