The Changed Spring
Time has changed..But not the memories
Each day and night..passed like centuries
Spring has come..reminding me of those beauriful days
The romantic nights..and your getting me lovely bouquets
How can I forget the walks we had
Those holding of hands..and your staring at my lips
That made you mad..
The sounds of the dry leaves..the never ending road
I still remember everything..But I think you got bored
The soothing wind..compeling me to fly
You were holding me tight..and we’re lost in the blue sky
The lovely music..and the drizzling rain..
The petals of the roses ..I forgot all my pain
Laying in the open sky..Talking about the stars
I wish I could stop the time and that very hour
It was my birthday..You got me a surprise
Those beautiful red roses and the love in your eyes
Your singing to me my favourite song
The connection of soul..and now you are gone
No matter things have changed so far
But I remember you even today my forever Rockstar..!!
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My dear you are always my star,an excellent write Surabhi,loved each line,got a nostalgic feel.
These lines are the core of this marvelous work.
No matter things have changed so far
But I remember you even today my forever Rockstar..!!
Love yaa
Piusha.
Heyy..Thank you soo muchh !! I am really honoured to listen these words from you..:) Your encouragement has always been wonderful..:) It really brings smile to my face..:)
Thank you again for your precious words..:)
Much Love
Surabhi
I am adding this to my favorite and a big high five..
Thats so sweet of you my lovely friend..thanks a lott for the stars..:)
Dear Surabhi,
Wonderful write, My vote and My nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you for your wonderful comment Sir..:) And thanks a lot for your vote and nom..:)
I was quiet busy with work and could not connect at cosmo..Will do read your writings soon..!
Ahhh what a lovely poem! These are some of my favorite lines:
Keep writing beautiful!!! 5*s from me!
Val <3
Thank youu soo veryy muchh for this ..:) I am glad you loved it..!
Thank you for the stars..:*
Love you My fav poet friend..:)
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Hey flower girl. .thank you soo much for loving it. . I am glad you enjoyed it. .:) :D
Loads of love
Surabhi