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Charcoal

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Myles Saitta
Charcoal

Charcoal he is; 
Courser than ever 

Cool like Luke; 
Feeling the fever 

Frost bitten he might;
Can’t tell for naught 

The sherpa was there;
But he wasn’t caught 
 

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Tags: 
Winter
Poetry Genre: 
Narrative Verse
Topic: 
Nature
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Tony Taylor

Hey MYLES!!...... this is VERY creative!!....... succinctly powerful....... Love the formatting..... winters embers!!......ALL STARS!!...... and ......WELCOME to COSMO!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.  ?✳✴☀

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