Poem -

Checking the Night Sky

Looking Up

Checking the Night Sky

Quite unlike any other
man made
or farm furrowed field ..
Her brow,
ridged deep and set
like some
rare stone silvered ..
Yet held
more firmly and high
above those
matched arches proud ..
Indeed,
each orb a special blue ..
Perfectly
aligned and celebrated
in night skies,
around the globe, just like
I am doing now,
but throughout all of history ..

 

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Being Me

The great Astral Field!  The night sky is a beauty to behold. Oh, the stars, how they sparkle! 🌟  (I love a bit of bling).  Another fabulous poem from you x

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Neville

You really know how to make a guy smile dont'cha ......... thank you Tina :) x

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Tony Taylor

The power of the poetically descriptive mind is on full display here.....the reverence painted here for the reader is truly captivating.....or at least it was for me!!......PINNED!!......well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered dear poet brother!!.......Bravo NEVILLE!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Neville

Bless ya brother ............................................. N :) 

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Gwendoline

Paint that sky with stars Neville...this is a breathtaking piece that reminds us all to look up and savour that most awesome sight that hangs over us all the time. The cosmos is a majestic place. One that lingers the echoes of loved ones past. The poet in you shines like the stars themselves here. A wonderful read my friend x 

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Neville

I'm there almost every night .............................................. & You my fine literary friend are far too bloomin kind .. Here, have one of these X no charge & I'll pop the cheque in the post :) 
 

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Neville

Well I'll be blowed .. how welcome and appreciated is that ... many HUGE thank yous Linda .. Neville :)

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