" Cherie Sumners Holy Water "
There's a melodic frenzy, feeding, in lieu of your positively pristine presence
Making a bed of roses, out of the harmonic parts of your symphonic essence
You're a song that sings to me, and moves in me, measure to measure
A theatrical performance in progress, a melodic treasure
You're the tune I'm whistling, whenever my face has that silly smile
You know the one, that takes my love for you, and portrays me like a child
And I just can't help myself, I'm experiencing things I'd long forgotten
I'm so happy that I'm beside myself, when I realize my fears are misbegotten
So although I try to convince myself, that all of this is just a dream
I find myself with your picture, the most beautiful thing I've ever seen
I feel like I'm seventeen again, I'm doing things against doctors orders
And the really interesting thing is, I've been improving without those borders
You've opened up the world to me, in ways I can't explain
I think you know me well, I know you understand my pain
But then there is that one thing, that only you can provide
You give me courage, the will to go out there and try
Because, Everything you are
Has taken root in me
YOU have become MY heart
The "Holy Water" on my seeds.....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Dear Brother Tony Taylor
Your poem reveals that though you are in pain, a high romantic feelings are healing them slowly.I love it, My applause, My vote, My love, Reserved for my POET'S PEN Column.
Love & Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
MR. MAVELI!!....you are gentlemen and a scholar.....I love it so much that you saw this for what it really is.........I've been working on this for quite some time......I am honored and shocked that you found it first!.........thank you so much my brother!........I am truly impressed my friend............smiles.....T xx
Hey little bro, this is a truly beautiful write from such an adoring soul who's love has no boundaries, expressing the depths of your love for Cherie, as she heals your soul, brings joys and song into your life, creating you as a new like within loving roots to grow more strength, indeed her beautiful heart and innocent soul is a healing essence in your life,
"You give me courage, the will to go out there and try
Because, Everything you are
Has taken root in me
YOU have become MY heart
The "Holy Water" on my seeds....."
may her holy water bring such positive afflictions to heal you inside out, away from the pain you have suffered long enough, love to you both, such powerful minds combined create the magic in this world, a union only god can create, and has for both of you, love always nardine xoxo
YAY NARDINE!!!.....thank you so much for your kind words.......I knew you would have just the perfect words to compliment this write for Cherie.......love the beauty in your heart big sis, you have been a light for me to guide myself ever since my first day here. ..........Thank You so much for your beautiful blessing my friend.............love you big Sis!!!..........stay golden..........smiles........T xx
Dear Brother Tony Taylor,
Love to all souls of love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear Mr. Maveli, WOW! I'm so impressed by your outpouring of genuine love and affection my brother.........the poem that you sent to me about Love brought me such a happy feeling, I shared it with Cherie who is equally moved by your actions .............with great admiration and appreciation.......your friend, Tony...........
A beautiful piece for a lovely girl that you and I both cherish. God is indeed with you both and has blessed you both with a wonderful gift. Your poetry is stunning and so generous. Beautiful soul that you are. I love you sweety. G xx
Dear Tony, i am so wonderfully captivated by your rich imagery and perfect development of this very loving and romantic peace for Cheri. Very true to your hearts love and desire to honor her and share everything with her......that you are finding your heart, soul and creative qualities opening up and blooming as your seed that are being watered by her personally with her Holy Water because it has that perfect quality to bring life forth from every part of you. Each response here shows the value of how you are writing since this love has been bring forth such love as evidence of that powerful love bursting into fullest bloom. Radiant is your beloved as you express yourself to her. Truly a joy to witness in your creative writing inspired by her. love to you dear friend xxxooo Tony and xxxooo for dearest Cheri.....yes she gets her own hugs and kisses but you can well understand why...love increases the fruitful goodness and blessings each day. It is simply great to see your happiness in this beautiful love you share together. Every good and fruitful blessing every day of your lives...from my heart to yours please know you are loved and very precious!