Poem -
claw marks
I've learned much more about you
The day you left me
Than the day I've met you.
My darling, can't you see?
There is blood all over your sleeve.
I will dig my nails deep in your body
And leave claw marks every time you leave.
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Comments
very cool stuff love it :-) xoxo
thanks :)
Hi Laura Zeppetelli,
Short, but very strong lines, good verse, my applause, my five stars, pour more poems,
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hey Laura.............succinct and powerful imagery...............strong write............well done............looking forward to more..........and Welcome to COSMO !!...........smiles............T xo
This does leave a very strong impression visually, good write
Descriptive and visual, short and to the point, I like it.