claw marks

very cool stuff love it :-) xoxo

Hi Laura Zeppetelli,

Short, but very strong lines, good verse, my applause, my five stars, pour more poems,

I will dig my nails deep in your body

And leave claw marks every time you leave.

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Hey Laura.............succinct and powerful imagery...............strong write............well done............looking forward to more..........and Welcome to COSMO !!...........smiles............T xo

This does leave a very strong impression visually, good write

Descriptive and visual, short and to the point, I like it.